Toy car in one hand, biscuit in another, he walked into the barn.
The stench of blood filled his young nostrils.
“Do it,” said his father, holding a gun in his right hand, sprawled across the floor, his chest bleeding out.
He finished the biscuit.
The gunshot alerted their dog.
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20 year old, Indian, blogger, avid reader, Manchester United FC follower, movie and TV show nut, among other seemingly random stuff.
Has a fierce interest in psychology and behaviour, is a bit of a lazy perfectionist who noticed the oxymoron but decided to leave it up, likes clouds and the little things in life.
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Who shot whom?
This is not fair at least leave us some answer
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I’ll definitely elaborate on this short story in the near future. Plus, keeping my readers in suspense is half the fun 😀 (Sorry!)
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You’ve left us with so many questions about this story! Love it!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Thrilling ! Nice work 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Gasp! Gripping! Who survived? What did the dog do? Did the neighbours find out??
Great post 😀
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I’d rather leave those questions unanswered :D. Thank you so much for stopping by! 🙂
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this really got me curious on what happens next…
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Maybe I’ll expand it later in another post :D. Thanks a lot for stopping by!
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you’re welcome. will look forward to it. 🙂
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Intriguing!
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Left a lot to be imagines. Good gripping stuff. Do visit my abode when you can. Cheers
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Thank you so much! :). Yes, I’ll definitely drop by sometime soon!
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Expecting you. I will put the kettle on the boil for a cuppa coffee or tea 😉
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Don’t worry, I won’t let it get cold 😉
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Good 🙂
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This is gruesomely thrilling! I held my breath until I reached the end! Shocks!
Great job!
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Shocking 😳
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It’s heart-wrenching and gut-wrenching.
Brought me scenes from the TV Dexter in mind.
Love and light ❤
Anand 🙂
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I’m sorry if that ruined your morning breakfast or something 🙈. Thanks a lot for stopping by though, Vibrant.
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LOL 😀
No, it was a way of appreciating your writing, Jai 🙂
I am used to it.
Love ❤
Anand
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LOL, I got that, I was just joking 😀
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Hehehe, ok, boss 😉
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